Y/A Fantasy
Khaos gazed at herself and admired what she had
beautifully and diligently created with her own never-ending formless body; a
body that made up the entire universe and the constellations contained within
it. With a great amount of pride and no
small measure of sauciness, she said 'I am Khaos, the primordial force who
initiates all life and all beings. I am the
mother to all, the beginning of the beginning.'
On her person there were tattoos of all of the constellations, planets,
and stars ever to be created; Orion, Pegasus, Cassiopeia and more that she was
able see in her visions.
Suddenly there was an earsplitting crash and a
gut-wrenching boom, and within her vast
body Khaos felt a tearing and a ripping that she had never felt before. Flinching she could only scream out loud,
'AHHH!!!' She had never felt anything so
horrific in her billions of
lifetimes. To one on the outside
looking in, she resembled a blackened mirror painted with the stars that had
just been hit by hammer, but not shattered; her surface was cracked. There were fissures snaking across her
beautiful body, and those cracks and fissures were leaking light. Khaos felt as if her lifeblood was pouring
out of her. 'Ahhhh!!!' She wailed again
in agony, her ethereal voice sounding foreign to her untested ears.
Out of the cracks she saw and felt hands clawing scraping
at her from within. Then those hands
that ripped so mercilessly at her emerged followed by a pair of gargantuan
feet. 'What is this that attacks me with
such vigor?' she cried out.
Racked with pain and dazed with confusion, Khaos had no
idea what was happening to her body; her well ordered universe. But she did know that she had to regain
control of herself and that now shaken universe, immediately. She could see the catastrophic results the
marauding hands and protruding feet had caused already, her well organized
galactic tattoos were in complete disarray.
Then in a flash she knew what was happening, she knew why the hands and
feet appeared, and with that revelation she heard voices, soft spoken voices,
barely a whisper on the breeze, but distinctly there.
'Free us, free us, free us,' they chanted in unison. 'Free us now!!' they roared.
'No, never..' she screamed. 'If my horribly damaged and disfigured body
is any example of your control, then you will forever be locked away. You will never be allowed to destroy what I
have created.' Khaos spoke to her
descendants with no love or remorse. She
knew who the invaders were, the ones trying to escape her being were her
children, but they would never see the universe from anywhere other than behind
the looking glass of her voluminous body.
Khaos girded herself and took control of the cosmos once
again. The appendages that had appeared
receded and disappeared back from whence they came, back into the darkness that
was her body. The horrendous pain was
still there, but Khaos willed herself to ignore it, endure the torment and
regain control of her realm. As the
planets glided back to their resting places, Khaos grunted and groaned. 'I will have order. I will have peace. I will have serenity.' Speaking the words as if speaking them would
make them come true, Khaos continued to repair her damaged casing.
'I will not relent,' she grunted out. 'I will maintain my watch and keep you
trapped. You will not escape and ruin my
beautiful creation. Ever.'
The god beings inside of Khaos heard her words and railed
in anger and frustration. 'We were
almost free, that shrew has no right to keep us trapped here,' Anubis said in a
voice filled with gravel and fury.
'Well, you should not have broken through. You should have and done as I have been
telling you for a million millennia, then we would be well on our way to
freedom, ' Hel said, her tone filled with irritation. 'But did you listen? No!' she answered her own question. 'Do you ever listen? No.
And where has that left us, trapped for eternity. I was working my way into her psyche. I would have been the voice of her conscience
and secured our release, without her even knowing she was being
manipulated. Now I am blocked from her
mind altogether. It is as if she now has
guards standing in readiness for my assault.
I can't get into her subconscious.
I am prohibited from entering thanks to you and your blundering ways. You stupid moronic goon.' Speaking in
multiple languages to get her point across, Hel insulted Anubis again, 'Malcriado,
grossier, laut, vlákas,' she said, her voice elevating with each insulting
word. (Spoiled, rude, loud, oaf.) 'I had everything well in hand, and you ...'
'Stop,' raising a hand Gaea spoke calmly, interrupting
Hel's tirade. Stunned, Hel turned to
face the intruder. Opening her mouth to
rail on her new opponent, she was stopped in her tracks, her voice trapped deep
in her throat as Gaea spoke with resolute strength in her tone.
'While you two stand and argue with each other, each
blaming the other for our entrapment, no one is devising a plan for
escape. Do you not realize that, since
Anubis was able to momentarily liberate himself from out tomb that there is a
chance that we will indeed be able to secure our escape?
So busy are you two with trivialities and bickering that
you do not see what is right in front of you.
Free your minds of anger and resentment and you will be able to clearly
see the solution to our dilemma. Our
escape is inevitable, we only need to work as one and our success will not be
denied.'
A crowd of gods circled the three god beings as they debated
ways to enact their escape. Some
proposed the delicious venture of exacting their revenge while others plotted
their own takeover schemes. Ever the
diplomat, Gaea mediated as the god beings ranted and raved, demanding vengeance
for their incarceration. Off in the
distance, away from the crowd, Okeanos listened with interest.
'What better way to take over the realm of the Great One,
than by borrowing the ideas of my brothers and sisters,' he whispered to
himself. 'Fools charge in with no
thoughts of a strategy or to the future and no plans for a proper sovereignty.' As Okeanos continued to talk quietly to
himself, another god watched the proceedings with interest.
Far away from everybody, Ragnarök watched all the goings
on with his complete attention. While
the other gods were still weak and without powers, he was gaining strength and
energy from their discord. Unbeknownst
to the others, he was going to be the most powerful one of them all. He was drinking in their disharmony like a
fine wine, sipping and savoring each drop that passed across his lips. 'Yes, children. Continue your quarreling, the cacophony feeds
my hunger and quenches my thirst,' Ragnarök said in a gruff voice that sounded
like he swallowed broken glass. 'Keep it
up and I will show you what destruction and mayhem really is.'
During the time the gods were conspiring against Khaos,
she was engrossed with her own operation.
She had to concentrate all of her energy so that the gods inside of her
could not escape again.
Prologue - nothing to add
ReplyDeleteChap 1:
P1, S2 - replace 'filed' with filled
P9, S5 - add the word 'many' before 'eons'
P29, S1 - add 'was' before 'vulnerable'
P30, S1 - add 'to' before 'muster'; replace 'no' with 'not'
P33, S2 - add 'to' before 'hurl'
P34, S3 - replace 'is' with 'are'