tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8569743179199700273.post2955369646994704771..comments2018-08-21T19:21:18.546-07:00Comments on Khaos Into Order: The Khaos Series - Khaos' Betrayal, Chapter 1Allissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17384501495811318951noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8569743179199700273.post-82262515682430997202014-02-27T16:35:25.136-08:002014-02-27T16:35:25.136-08:00Prologue - nothing to add
Chap 1:
P1, S2 - replac...Prologue - nothing to add<br /><br />Chap 1:<br />P1, S2 - replace 'filed' with filled<br />P9, S5 - add the word 'many' before 'eons'<br />P29, S1 - add 'was' before 'vulnerable'<br />P30, S1 - add 'to' before 'muster'; replace 'no' with 'not'<br />P33, S2 - add 'to' before 'hurl'<br />P34, S3 - replace 'is' with 'are'<br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04385395549441967842noreply@blogger.com